I believe that this draft is well presented it advertises a upcoming song contest in short and sweet fashion. Have i chosen the right colours to attract everyone and not a particular group? i believe so but in future drafts i need to be more certain on my colour choices because readers will completely ignore the advert if they believe the colour is aimed for them.
I also have very limited information with just a link to a website for more information, next time shall add the date of contest and(or)venue of the event; something like that will make the advert that little more informative and successful.
Wednesday, 24 December 2014
Advertisement draft review (drafting and planning)
I believe that this draft is well presented it advertises a upcoming song contest in short and sweet fashion. Have i chosen the right colours to attract everyone and not a particular group? i believe so but in future drafts i need to be more certain on my colour choices because readers will completely ignore the advert if they believe the colour is aimed for them.
I also have very limited information with just a link to a website for more information, next time shall add the date of contest and(or)venue of the event; something like that will make the advert that little more informative and successful.
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