Radio advert 2 review (drafting and planning)

This is advert is shorter than my first draft which is no bad thing as long as you get the point across. This second draft is far more professional than the initial one, telling you where you can buy it; it gives you restricted information on what is featured within the magazine which is good because it can make the listener want to find out more about the magazine and the only way to do that is by buying it.

I believe there is a bit of fun in this draft, but it doesn't become comical which is good because the main aim is to sell more than entertain; although it is good share a joke or two with the listener to make them like you more and maybe become biased and have a more positive view of the magazine your selling.

My Radio advert draft 2 (Drafting and planning)

(Narrator) Ladies and gentlemen the time has come, we bring you the big one, the local one, the cities one; we bring "Talk of Town" a brand new regional magazine that can talk for the country; Fortunately it is only talking for our city.

What are you into? sports?fashion? maybe you just want to study? "Talk of the town" can help you in all 3 aspects and many more. Talk of the town is officially out now and will available at your local news agents.

So what are yo waiting for? Go!

Radio Adverts (Research into similar products)

Radio Advert draft (review)

I believe the radio ad is entertaining and can be remembered because some of the sentences rhyme as well as being slightly funny. There is room for improvement though because although it rhymes and this funny it is way to comical and needs to been taken a bit more serious. The way i set it out the characters could be mistaken as being sarcastic and the features mentioned is not mind-blowing, it also won't interest enough consumers although it could be enough to attract some consumers.

I think the advert has enough humour but to improve i need more seriousness/ professionalism to go with it and since my target audience is pretty large it could be deemed as to immature for some radio listeners.

Radio advertisement draft (Drafting and Planning)

(script)

1: So what is the 'Talk the town'?

2:The magazine?

1: no its genuine question?

2: why are you asking me, why don't you just buy 'talk of the town' magazine. The magazine gives you all of the latest city gossip, you can catch up with the latest sport news, awards reviews and find your next pair of shoes in the monthly magazine. The magazine is a great educator in learning more about your city and its roots.

1. Thats great but...

2. but that's not it, you can also read through exclusive celebrity interviews and have your own student section you; meaning you can do revision work and talk with 'talk of the town'

1, Wouldn't i  look like a clown?

2. Not if you spread the word

1. Best get started then (running noise)

(silence)

2. Talk of the town coming to stores near you. Ta-raa

They'll be Radio ad (Organisation)

Talk of the town will have a radio ad to support itself, the ad will involve me promoting my magazine in a you unique but entertaining way, it won't just include a stereotypical persuasive speech; it'll have something to remember included and i am planning what that might be.

The reasons to have things included entertaining and remembered allow the magazine stand out from others. The problem i have with some radio adverts is that i can't spread its news to others because there is nothing to remember them by; Apart from the brand name and what the product is which isn't convincing

Talk of the town contents page review (Drafting and planning)

Talk of the town article review (Drafting and planning)

Cover-page draft review (Drafting and planning)

Talk of the down Article draft (Drafting and planning)

Contents-Page draft (Drafting and Planning)

Talk of the Town cover-page draft (Drafting and planning)

 This is a cover-page on how i want my magazine to mainly look like, the background is a aerial shot of the city; this background was edited into word as the 'cutout' artistic effect.                                        The colour as altered into a blueish font; i did this so that the text stood out and was more readable as well as being creative with the 'cutout' effect.

 I don't believe my headlines were as eye-catching in font nor wording as they could be, but this is something i can work on. This draft is unique and creative but i know i can go 2 steps further by making by headline more effective and by adding more creativity to catch the eye of someone and that is what successful magazines do.

Target age (Target audience)

Initially i wanted to make my target audience for all ages but thinking back it is hard to please everyone, it is like featuring a colour-in picture and local business advertising in the same magazine and they both target different ages. My magazines target age will be 18 to 24 year olds because i believe it is essential for this age group to learn more about your city which will help know more about what they want for future and what this city offers for them