This is advert is shorter than my first draft which is no bad thing as long as you get the point across. This second draft is far more professional than the initial one, telling you where you can buy it; it gives you restricted information on what is featured within the magazine which is good because it can make the listener want to find out more about the magazine and the only way to do that is by buying it.
I believe there is a bit of fun in this draft, but it doesn't become comical which is good because the main aim is to sell more than entertain; although it is good share a joke or two with the listener to make them like you more and maybe become biased and have a more positive view of the magazine your selling.
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